Curling up like a ball in my bed,
I’m still alive, but more like dead..
My heart is aching with such a pain,
Since you left me crying in the rain..
And to wipe those tears in my eyes,
You won’t be here, it’d be no surprise..
And here I say- Please Don’t Come Back..
Never ever come back!!
There you made me all yours by your charms,
And the other day I found you in her arms..
I gave you all my love,
But I guess,for you, that wasn’t enough..
You called my heart as clear as glass,
Never knew you’d break it into shards..
So here I say- Please Don’t Come Back..
Never ever come back!!
All I saw was love so deep in your eyes,
How could I not see, beneath them was all lies..
Your touch,your smell, I could never forget,
Moreover the fateful day, when we first met..
You promised to be my guardian angel forever,
But left me broken as if this love wasn’t there ever..
Still here I say- Please Don’t Come Back..
Never ever come back!!
You are my life, everything to me,
But strange game is being played by destiny..
The one who called me beautiful like a rose,
Played with my heart like a game of lacrosse..
Even though you left me, I still love you,
And when you’ll realise your mistake, I’d even forgive you..
But even then I say – Please Don’t Come Back..
Never ever come back!!
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You’re definitely back.. and back with a bang… amazing poem… i really liked they way it progressed.. and the way you ended it… its pretty awesome.. best part is when you said that I can’t control my love for you and I can forgive you again.. but for me.. don’t come back.. that was touching… I liked it.. You definitely raised the bar of this website…
o yeah!! thankiewwwww =)
guess what, it is my maiden attempt at writing something upon HEARTBREAK. I’ll still have miles to go! But I’m more glad that I’m finally out of writer’s block! And that this entry came out GOOD =)
I am happy too.. in fact I am writing one poem now.. and Will post it today or tomorrow…
WOW!! That’s something cool =)
And I have another plot in my mind.. will work upon it soon
ohhh that is great… I hope you write it very soon… I see this one is getting popular with people…
haha!! sure i’ll
and yeah it’s getting popular … but apart from you and me, no one is posting feedback =p
it is because to post a comment one must register on this website, only then can anyone post a feedback… I did it because open feedback is invitation to spamming…
nice one
hmmmm…n ppl r lazieeeeee
hmm you can say that..lol
it’s absolutely an awesome poem…its really nice one.Read a gud one after a long time…gud sense of poetry as well..keep ur gud work going….:)